I Miss You Poem by Rob Lamberton

I Miss You

Rating: 5.0

When the day is hot and long
When the desert cries it's song
When the night won't turn to day
When I have no more to play

When three words are all I know
When the plants refuse to grow
When the birds won't take to flight
When the day turns into night

When will it ever be again
When will I breath the air so thin
When will this thirst be ever quenched
When will the horse take to the cinch

Saturday, April 5, 2025
Topic(s) of this poem: horse,plants
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 07 April 2025

Wonderful flow...... like it....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 07 April 2025

Bravo Rob It was a joy to read TFS

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Rebecca Navarre 08 April 2025

A beautiful poem from the heart on longing! ..

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Miss Grace 07 May 2025

Missing some one truly doesnt really search for circumstance, the poem really explains that beautifully

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M.J. Lemon 11 April 2025

Fantastic verse, Rob!

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Rob Lamberton 09 April 2025

Thank you for stopping by and adding such great comments!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 April 2025

A beautiful poem adorned with lovely flow of poetic expressions and nice rhyme. Each and every stanza stands out showing how to desperately miss someone.

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Rebecca Navarre 08 April 2025

So beautifully composed and heart felt! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++

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