I Miss You Poem by lady grace

I Miss You

Rating: 4.7


keep me under your wings
so i could be closer to your heart
let your lips close to mine
so you could smell the fragrance of my scent...

let me love you always
and be my love forever
keep me under your wings
and let me close to your heart...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noel Horlanda 12 July 2009

I enjoyed reading all your work, lovely words, lovely choice, lovely everything. I'm like a little chick hidin' under the mother hen's wings away from a predator hovering above. And the mother hen is you my Lady. Thanks.

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The Dreamer 11 July 2009

keep me under your wings and let me close to your heart Such nice words that make you fell the warmth

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Ken E Hall 11 July 2009

You let your heart out here we can feel it nice for the senses...... regards

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Kerry O'Connor 11 July 2009

You have created a very romantic mood by evoking our senses. Thank you for sharing this poem with me.

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Dork Dork 10 July 2009

Good words, yet very short, and I am the type who likes it when words rhyme all the time. Also, the title made me think it was going to be a bit different. Nice job though.

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keep me under your wings so i could be closer to your heart let your lips close to mine so you co.............. desire any way to remain so closer..beautiful imagination with strong urge....10 read mine miss i miss u and anywhere...

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Miriam Maia Padua 20 July 2009

lovely... so beautiful to think and feel... graciously written... fine-flowing.....I love thins... very passionate... 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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rago rago 20 July 2009

powerful to read.......and beautiful to comment...... lady grace is always gracious in writing...

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sweet and very inviting..

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Alf Hutchison 19 July 2009

Two words... brief and beautiful... thanks for the invite regards Alf 10

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