I Missed A Poet (Timing Is Everything) Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

I Missed A Poet (Timing Is Everything)

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I sit in awe of you
reading snowflakes
like life lessons
falling from the sky

I read your sensuality
quietly rising
like the mist from my earl
secret desires hidden in the fog

I am missing
day consuming chats laced with
late afternoon waterfalls
and not so hidden innuendos

it seems touching
a soul across
a sea of light and fish and words
takes both time and effort

and who really has that to give?

Tuesday, December 20, 2005
Topic(s) of this poem: fish,fog
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Todd Jones 20 December 2005

That's how you start a poem! ! ! very well done would love to hear some of your comments on my stuff....its nice to see some good work posted on here.

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***** ********* 20 December 2005

This poem of yours flows like a meadering summer stream in the depth of winter Eila. Thanks for sharing it,10 from smiling, but tiredTai

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