I Missed You Poem by shakil ahmed

I Missed You

Rating: 4.5


I missed you so much
I was waiting to get your touch.
Moon beams were soft and tender,
Sky was wadded with twinkling star,
Wind was singing songs of mourning,
Tired and weary horses were resting,
The wings of black bats were flapping,
When the world was such,
I missed you so much.
I was all alone in the night,
Panting for you along with your light,
I was waiting with a hungry heart,
Out of suffering, my heart was torn apart.
As the night was getting grim,
You were becoming visible in my dream.
I felt your touch in a joyous mood,
Though in vision, it was good.
You were coy and generous,
I had been in ecstasy for few hours.
When ever I feel for you,
When ever I miss you,
You come in my vision,
I forget the pangs of separation.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kay Connolly 22 October 2009

it's very well written. anybody who has been in love could understand 10+

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 16 November 2014

Feeling of loss of the dear one is created in the poem and it is a nice one.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 16 November 2014

Feeling of loss of the dear one is created in the poem and it is a nice one.

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Bharati Nayak 04 July 2015

Pining of the heart in the dark and painful hours for the guiding light of love whose lovely touch can wipe away the pains and sufferings is well captured in this poem.- - - - -Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 01 December 2015

Absolutely beautiful, the rhythm is excellent. I have read so many poems from India and your poems stand out to the very best. 10.., .

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Chinedu Dike 29 October 2019

Beautiful love poem written with clarity of thought and mind. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharings, Shakira.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 September 2018

Wind was singing songs of mourning/Tired and weary horses were resting/The wings of black bats were flapping, When the world was such/I missed you so much.....I profusely admire the beauty of poetic expression! A fabulous poem...10

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Azim choudhury 11 July 2018

Nice ?? sir

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Muzahidul Reza 21 March 2018

Miss / missing, here is the interest of life originates some emotions and experiences in life, .......... and finally if unity happens then comes heaven as you say, You come in my vision, I forget the pangs of separation....... excellently written, thanks for sharing the poem with us, ++++++ 10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 16 October 2017

While I kept reading this poem, I saw myself as I was writing few years ago. A clear diction, great imagery and a very clean concept. I wish to read more poems and see you grow up into a fantastic poet.

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shakil ahmed

shakil ahmed

Badarpur, Assam, India.
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