I Missed You Poem by shakil ahmed
I Missed You
I missed you so much
I was waiting to get your touch.
Moon beams were soft and tender,
Sky was wadded with twinkling star,
Wind was singing songs of mourning,
Tired and weary horses were resting,
The wings of black bats were flapping,
When the world was such,
I missed you so much.
I was all alone in the night,
Panting for you along with your light,
I was waiting with a hungry heart,
Out of suffering, my heart was torn apart.
As the night was getting grim,
You were becoming visible in my dream.
I felt your touch in a joyous mood,
Though in vision, it was good.
You were coy and generous,
I had been in ecstasy for few hours.
When ever I feel for you,
When ever I miss you,
You come in my vision,
I forget the pangs of separation.
Feeling of loss of the dear one is created in the poem and it is a nice one.
Feeling of loss of the dear one is created in the poem and it is a nice one.
Pining of the heart in the dark and painful hours for the guiding light of love whose lovely touch can wipe away the pains and sufferings is well captured in this poem.- - - - -Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.
Absolutely beautiful, the rhythm is excellent. I have read so many poems from India and your poems stand out to the very best. 10.., .
Beautiful love poem written with clarity of thought and mind. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharings, Shakira.
Wind was singing songs of mourning/Tired and weary horses were resting/The wings of black bats were flapping, When the world was such/I missed you so much.....I profusely admire the beauty of poetic expression! A fabulous poem...10
Miss / missing, here is the interest of life originates some emotions and experiences in life, .......... and finally if unity happens then comes heaven as you say, You come in my vision, I forget the pangs of separation....... excellently written, thanks for sharing the poem with us, ++++++ 10
While I kept reading this poem, I saw myself as I was writing few years ago. A clear diction, great imagery and a very clean concept. I wish to read more poems and see you grow up into a fantastic poet.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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it's very well written. anybody who has been in love could understand 10+