Alone Poem by shakil ahmed


Rating: 4.3

Alone, alone, alone
I was all alone
I was alone in my mother’s womb
I will be alone in my grave beneath the tomb
My life was a lone journey
There was none to accompany
She chose me as companion
I promised not to abandon
They say it was a heavenly knot,
Many battles of life together we fought
Suddenly a gushing wind blowing over the land
Swept her away who was my only friend
I was like a mate less dove
Wandering to and fro hankering love
Living in this mundane world
I love someone who is in another world
No man can give life to a dead one
It is only I who can make a dead alive
When in my couch I lie
She comes in my vision
She speaks, she loves, she atones…
I feel her love, touch her fragrant Jones,
I quench my thirst of hungry heart
With a girl who is fallen apart
For some times she remains alive
With a woeful heart my love I give
Again, I become alone when I awake
My lone journey again I take
In the midst of millions I become alone
It is fated that for no reasons I atone.

Muhammad Ali 27 October 2015

If I say, you again departed and make the millions alone. A nice and sad poem Shakeel bro.

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 25 October 2015

Hi Shakil, I read your poem ' Alone'. It is really very interesting! to be alone is really very sad; I like the rhyming which is very good!

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Sumit Ganguly 20 October 2015

A beautiful poem. It refers to eternal truth and love.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 18 October 2015

The poet expresses the feeling of death in great expressions in this poem..

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Vishal Sharma 17 October 2015

life is just an illusion with whom you are today would leave you tomorrow just we have to do what we are meant to do

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 September 2018

She comes in my vision She speaks, she loves, she atones… I feel her love, touch her fragrant Jones, I quench my thirst of hungry heart.....fascinating expression! An adorable piece of poetry! (10)

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Richard Wlodarski 30 September 2017

Shakil, you've done an excellent job with this heart-wrenching poem. You've captured the essence of aloneness VS loneliness. As a reader, I was able to sincerely feel your aloneness. Excellent write! Thank you for inviting me to your poetry page.

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Nosheen Irfan 31 May 2016

Very heart-touching poem on loneliness. You have described your lonely journey in a very smooth flow of words. Well-worded n well-conceived work.

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Sahra Hussein 05 March 2016

This is very beautiful poem it really heart Good work! !

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Anzelyne Shideshe 08 February 2016

Emotional poem loneliness a nightmare in life.keep on writing.

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shakil ahmed

shakil ahmed

Badarpur, Assam, India.
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