shakil ahmed

Gold Star - 15,874 Points (31-01-1969 / Badarpur, Assam, India.)

I Remember Those Lies - Poem by shakil ahmed

I Remember those lies

I remember those lies
Those were spoken long ago,
Sitting in a green park
Or on the bank of river
I couldn’t recognize
This fair girl
Wearing the garb of a hypocrite

I couldn’t recognize
The smile of that girl
That was painted
In her rosy lips.
I lost myself
At the wink
Of her terribly wild eyes
And her concocted lies.
Her amorous look was,
At the time of every departure,
A thing to remember.
Her lisping words
Seemed true like a child
I couldn’t understand
That a day would come
When I would be beguiled.

I was a fool,
Just like an insect
That jumped into fire
To get ecstatic pleasure.
The fire has burnt
My heart and soul,
Though I live with flesh and bone
Yet in the world, I am terribly alone.

Shakil Ahmed.

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about I Remember Those Lies by shakil ahmed

  • Sathyanarayana M V S (10/16/2017 11:12:00 PM)


    Oh Shakeel, you got a beautiful expression! So true from heart, sweet and poignant! (Report) Reply

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  • Kewayne Wadley (11/30/2015 4:23:00 PM)


    Heartbreaking story told in such a distinghished manner.
    Nice usage of words.
    It flowed beautifully into a tremendous piece of art.
    KW
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  • Wes Vogler (11/12/2015 1:55:00 AM)


    Oh, for heavens sake, get over it g ood flow, Shakil (Report) Reply

  • (11/6/2015 3:37:00 PM)


    Deceit wears many disguises. But no one who seeks love is a fool. We are foolish only when we say we no longer need or want love. A very emotional, well written poem. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (11/5/2015 3:32:00 AM)


    Lies hurts! Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (11/4/2015 10:59:00 AM)


    The doublespeak of lovers can create not only misunderstandings but also grave problems for the relationship. Amazing portrayal of the situation. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/4/2015 9:31:00 AM)


    This is very good poem which speaks about the innocence of a human mind...Though I live with flesh and bone
    Yet in the world, I am terribly alone.10.
    (Report) Reply

  • Rahman Henry (11/4/2015 9:28:00 AM)


    Lovely poem and very artistic presentation. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 4, 2015



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