! ...I Realize You Poem by Seema Aarella

! ...I Realize You

Rating: 3.7

I believe I realize you,

When every tangled emotion
Deprived of freedom
In me, begins to undo
With a consoling legitimacy

When involuntary words
During a creative black-out
Appear out of my pen and
Construct an honest note.

When my emptiness finds time
to sneak into endless data streams
on invisible electronic lines
Looking for your presence

When my laden heart sings
In a blessed soliloquy
Its sublime paeans of devotion
In a subconscious worship

When I assume your dedication
To me and my thoughts only,
In that possessive helplessness
of a sneaking jealousy

I believe I realize you……..

Marvin Brato 24 October 2008

Very intimate poem with much passion! A 10.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 24 October 2008

What a honest look into your self... Andrew 10

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Kesav Easwaran 24 October 2008

a good belief...a very good realisation...thanks for sharing your best love! 10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 24 October 2008

all moods and dimensions of love...........10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 October 2008

Hey seema, realization expressed beautifully......insightful..........10++++++

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Rakhi Jayashankar 26 October 2008

a poem which makes the reader think

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Colin Jeffery 26 October 2008

A deep and moving poem.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 October 2008

The realisation of you has made this piece a reality.....nice write Seema!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 October 2008

Seema, a nice poem. With emotion and imagery. With a different tasty approach. It's beautiful. So I am undone. I added my 10 with pleasure.

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premji premji 25 October 2008

in emptiness everything exists!

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