Gazing the mountain from my windowpane
A green monument seen estranged
Sandwiched in between clouds
Echo of thunder cried aloud
At the eastern peak, where misty morning
Climbed over the cliff, scaling
Birds glided across, like rainbow rising
Spreaded their wings, streaming
Through the sheer rock faces
Leaving trails in phases
The pinnacles and crags are mouth watering
Tempted and lured climbers, a reckoning
Up above the northern peak
Zephyr marching oh so weak
Forming an adiabatic
Submontane filled with organic
At the bottom, river terraces
One of the mountain multi faces
The crystalline steep slopes
Decorated with climbing ropes
Heavenly as seen from above
A sign of a divine love
You flowed, like an Andean Amazon
Our love grown full-blown
I desire a woman
I seek a mountain
amazing i really liked it great job...i could never write something like this
A poem which centers on the wonderful treasure, woman. a wonderful style that rise to the climax, woman
I like this one and obviously subject matter is appealing.Not easy to find new phrases, metaphors that can be used but you've managed it very nicely. For description and form one of my oldest poems is Daybreak..have a look if you can..overall reference should be apparent. David
Great poetry. There is excellent imagery here! ...............
beautiful i think every woman should read this. just great and i thought my poems were good
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
SWEETIE, WE, YOUR FANS, KNOW THAT YOU DON'T HAVE TO LOOK FOR A WOMAN. WE JUST ASSUME THAT THEY'RE LINED UP DAILY AT YOUR DOOR, TWENTY-FOUR HOURS A DAY! EVERY PERSON WHO READS YOUR EXQUISITELY DELINEATED PORTRAIT OF WORDS WANTS TO TRAVEL THE WORLD WITH YOU, HAVE YOU BRING THEM INTO THE PRESENT MOMENT AND SHARE YOUR REACTIONS TO ALL THAT IS THERE TO BEHOLD, ABSORB AND EMBRACE. YOUR ENERGY AND INSIGHT RADIATE!