* Out Of The Box * Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

* Out Of The Box *

Rating: 3.5

Gold, silver and bronze
Maker of loser
Rich trounces the poor
Check and balance
Is needed

To move a mountain
You need money

A plain simple

Aaliyah Islaam 16 February 2010

It brings itself to a short and simple point there is such a fine line between success and failure And it is true sometimes you can move mountains with money. but i guess it depends on the mountain. I like it Lauren

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Joker Chicago 16 February 2010

his is one sad, but realistic view of our world. If you have money, you can... Don't let me even start counting. It is beautyful. Bravo!

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Antonio Liao 17 February 2010

so bright is the illusion of man's treasure....a poem of fully loaded with reflection...denuded by total surrender of quest....very beautiful poem... God bless...a 10 +++

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Lady Grace 19 February 2010

rich and poor vary in needs but only the amount varies rich need big amount while poor needs less.... what matters most? ...money.....o, don't question my words here my SMY...winners are rewarded, ranks will tell what to win.......aaaaaaaaaa....my dear, do u think this poem is a simple one? ..no, it is complicated since many poetic are seen here in abstract details....u can delet this anytime if it sounds not gud....smileeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Ronn Michael Salinas 19 February 2010

The title's ironic.

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Marieta Maglas 28 August 2013

Maybe you can write again...after so many years....I still wait for..your poetry

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 20 April 2010

Hi... Although this poem is simple, it does have a deep meaning - so lovely poem...

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Vandavasu Vittal 06 March 2010

A very intelligent write and spectacular closure.

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Sahar Sahar 24 February 2010

poem ends with a need that is power for any action.......meaningful and marvellous

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*_sakura ~daisy_* 23 February 2010

Filled with a much insight..truths..i like it^^

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