* Out Of The Box * Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

simple, but meaningful.....

Simple but to a fundamental point well done!

A good simple way to describe a problem that has faced man for a long time. You can certainly take elements of this for future poems.

Good luck on that on Sulaiman. Separating the rich from their gold is like driving trucks without wheels. It doesn't happen too much and it doesn't go to far from home. It might be plain to you but it certainly isn't simple for them. a poet friend.. RH PEAT

cool¡ Caind of Humorous, i really like it¡ jaja. You really can wright¡

Maybe you can write again...after so many years....I still wait for..your poetry

Hi... Although this poem is simple, it does have a deep meaning - so lovely poem...

A very intelligent write and spectacular closure.

poem ends with a need that is power for any action.......meaningful and marvellous

Filled with a much insight..truths..i like it^^