Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

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* Out Of The Box * - Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Gold, silver and bronze
Maker of loser
Rich trounces the poor
Check and balance
Is needed

To move a mountain
You need money

A plain simple


Comments about * Out Of The Box * by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

  • (8/28/2013 3:36:00 PM)


    Maybe you can write again...after so many years....I still wait for..your poetry (Report) Reply

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  • (4/20/2010 10:51:00 PM)


    Hi...
    Although this poem is simple, it does have a deep meaning - so lovely poem...
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  • (3/6/2010 9:51:00 PM)


    A very intelligent write and spectacular closure. (Report) Reply

  • (2/24/2010 11:49:00 PM)


    poem ends with a need that is power for any action.......meaningful and marvellous (Report) Reply

  • (2/23/2010 4:05:00 PM)


    Filled with a much insight..truths..i like it^^ (Report) Reply

  • (2/22/2010 4:27:00 AM)


    simple, but meaningful..... (Report) Reply

  • (2/21/2010 3:45:00 PM)


    Simple but to a fundamental point well done! (Report) Reply

  • Louis Cecile (2/21/2010 8:22:00 AM)


    A good simple way to describe a problem that has faced man for a long time. You can certainly take elements of this for future poems. (Report) Reply

  • (2/20/2010 9:57:00 AM)


    Good luck on that on Sulaiman. Separating the rich from their gold is like driving trucks without wheels. It doesn't happen too much and it doesn't go to far from home. It might be plain to you but it certainly isn't simple for them. a poet friend.. RH PEAT (Report) Reply

  • (2/19/2010 7:21:00 PM)


    cool¡ Caind of Humorous, i really like it¡ jaja. You really can wright¡ (Report) Reply

  • Ronn Michael Salinas (2/19/2010 12:57:00 AM)


    The title's ironic. (Report) Reply

  • (2/19/2010 12:02:00 AM)


    rich and poor vary in needs
    but only the amount varies
    rich need big amount
    while poor needs less....

    what matters most? ...money.....o, don't question my words here my SMY...winners are rewarded, ranks will tell what to win.......aaaaaaaaaa....my dear, do u think this poem is a simple one? ..no, it is complicated since many poetic are seen here in abstract details....u can delet this anytime if it sounds not gud....smileeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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  • Thor Fabian Pettersen (2/18/2010 3:56:00 AM)


    The true face of our evolutionary arms race
    Where pipe dreams are pipe dreams
    And money is money!
    Parag Khanna talks about why WW3 has not yet been shown in a theater near you!
    Statistically speaking, WW3 should have already sold out!
    Put an end to the trilogy –
    (Do you not want to see how it ends?)
    The game has shifted, from zero-sum to non-zero-sum –
    Globalization (the internet?) is our savior, not Jesus Christ!
    http: //fora.tv/2008/03/26/Empires_and_Influence_in_the_New_Global_Order

    The poem made me think, well penned
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  • (2/17/2010 2:14:00 AM)


    so bright is the illusion of man's treasure....a poem of fully loaded with
    reflection...denuded by total surrender of quest....very beautiful poem...
    God bless...a 10 +++
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  • (2/16/2010 6:45:00 PM)


    his is one sad, but realistic view of our world. If you have money, you can... Don't let me even start counting. It is beautyful. Bravo! (Report) Reply

  • (2/16/2010 6:42:00 PM)


    It brings itself to a short and simple point

    there is such a fine line between success and failure

    And it is true sometimes you can move mountains with money. but i guess it depends on the mountain.

    I like it

    Lauren
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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (2/16/2010 12:12:00 AM)


    To move a mountain
    You need money

    A plain simple

    I don't think that it's a plain simple, Sulaiman, but it's your opinion and you are successful to make your point.
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  • (2/15/2010 12:17:00 PM)


    i agree with you but a little faith goes a long way; i'm still out of the box with you (Report) Reply

  • (2/15/2010 8:34:00 AM)


    like for certain things, money can buy it, but not all. its a good poem with a huge meaning behind it... (Report) Reply

  • (2/15/2010 2:51:00 AM)


    such small but so meaning ful poem very good. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 11, 2010



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