Wasting my confidence
I lost all my independence
When you are not by my side
Because you are not there not even my guide
The heavy grip I faced on
Feels the muscles and the bone
I think am to forget the frail love
That I have been considered first and last
I am obedient when orders comes
Am glad to face the coming games
As I have a hamper to prevent my way
I am obeisance for the adorable boy
These are the feelings
Hurts me morning and evenings
I have no idea what I was calling it
But now I guess it is love fate
fate teaches you a lot in life...one subject is love good poignant write...much soil is seen eroded off there...10
A genuine and innocent expression of love. Your loved one is lucky.
Well expressed... These are the feelings (hurting) mornings and.........change the word hurts
Luwi u young n amazing poet i loved it totally amazing keep da good work up Mohamed
Very nice Luwi you capture the readers imagination and you never let go, keep it up.
i was just lost lost for a while when i read this poem... Luwi you are a genuine being and a wonderful poet too... i could relate the poem for we share the same age group.. thank you for sharing.. love prashant
Very interesting. You have to think hard to absorb the message. Well written
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
love fate good write 10