I Think It Is Love Fate Poem by Luwi Habte

I Think It Is Love Fate

Rating: 5.0


Wasting my confidence
I lost all my independence
When you are not by my side
Because you are not there not even my guide

The heavy grip I faced on
Feels the muscles and the bone
I think am to forget the frail love
That I have been considered first and last

I am obedient when orders comes
Am glad to face the coming games
As I have a hamper to prevent my way
I am obeisance for the adorable boy

These are the feelings
Hurts me morning and evenings
I have no idea what I was calling it
But now I guess it is love fate

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 14 November 2009

love fate good write 10

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Kesav Easwaran 14 November 2009

fate teaches you a lot in life...one subject is love good poignant write...much soil is seen eroded off there...10

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 14 November 2009

A genuine and innocent expression of love. Your loved one is lucky.

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Eyan Desir 14 November 2009

Well expressed... These are the feelings (hurting) mornings and.........change the word hurts

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Eyan Desir 14 November 2009

Well expressed young lady

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Mohamed Poetic Soul Ahmed 23 December 2009

Luwi u young n amazing poet i loved it totally amazing keep da good work up Mohamed

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John Mcmanus 25 November 2009

Very nice Luwi you capture the readers imagination and you never let go, keep it up.

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Prashant Shaurya 25 November 2009

i was just lost lost for a while when i read this poem... Luwi you are a genuine being and a wonderful poet too... i could relate the poem for we share the same age group.. thank you for sharing.. love prashant

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Henry Brown 23 November 2009

Very interesting. You have to think hard to absorb the message. Well written

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Nathan Barkley 16 November 2009

Very beautiful. I liked that poem

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