I Wail With Silent Cry Poem by Asif Baloch

I Wail With Silent Cry

Rating: 4.7


I was born as a useless being
Sent in the myth of painful scene
Chain of venomous thorns put on me
Each moment when it ties
I wail with a silent cry

I write with trembling hands
I try but could not stand
I weep with no tears left to shed
Soul is haunted by lonely thoughts
I wail with a silent cry

My eyes open wide but still in dreams
My lips are sealed but I hear painful screams
My heart, alas my poor heart
Sings a sad song of love to be
Standing alone and no one by my side
I wail with a silent cry

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ershad Mazumder 16 October 2008

Thanks for this piece. Drop first line and make it more poetic.You have poetic talent.Read and edit your postings repeatedly.

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Asif Andalib 16 October 2008

I like your poems a lot. This one portrays the pain and hope during loneliness in a splendid way.10 for this piece.

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Emo Seb 15 October 2008

this is beautiful and deep. great write.

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 15 October 2008

very very heartrending aijaz...really nice it feels as i with every piece you get more and more refined in your art...well done.

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Kesav Easwaran 15 October 2008

a write on sad feelings...good emotions there...poem expressive 10

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Standing alone and no one by my side- a moment made invincible and timeless

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Dr Kamran Haider 22 October 2008

Beautiful portryal of painful moemnts and tormented emotions... A great piece indeed... Keep it up Asif... Regards, Kamran

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 October 2008

A amusing poem that touches heart. Especially, the last four lines are wonderful. Love it.10 added.

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Gargi Saha 18 October 2008

A wonderful poem. U get 10++

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Joe Breunig 17 October 2008

An enjoyable piece; I will e-mail you some private suggestions on how to possibly increase the strength of this poem. -Joe

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