I was born as a useless being
Sent in the myth of painful scene
Chain of venomous thorns put on me
Each moment when it ties
I wail with a silent cry
I write with trembling hands
I try but could not stand
I weep with no tears left to shed
Soul is haunted by lonely thoughts
I wail with a silent cry
My eyes open wide but still in dreams
My lips are sealed but I hear painful screams
My heart, alas my poor heart
Sings a sad song of love to be
Standing alone and no one by my side
I wail with a silent cry
I like your poems a lot. This one portrays the pain and hope during loneliness in a splendid way.10 for this piece.
very very heartrending aijaz...really nice it feels as i with every piece you get more and more refined in your art...well done.
a write on sad feelings...good emotions there...poem expressive 10
Standing alone and no one by my side- a moment made invincible and timeless
Beautiful portryal of painful moemnts and tormented emotions... A great piece indeed... Keep it up Asif... Regards, Kamran
A amusing poem that touches heart. Especially, the last four lines are wonderful. Love it.10 added.
An enjoyable piece; I will e-mail you some private suggestions on how to possibly increase the strength of this poem. -Joe
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thanks for this piece. Drop first line and make it more poetic.You have poetic talent.Read and edit your postings repeatedly.