Adeline Foster

Gold Star - 9,222 Points (Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD)

. I Walk In The Sunshine - Poem by Adeline Foster

I Walk In The Sunshine

I Walk In The Sunshine
You live in the night
You're not where I'm going
My future is bright
I'll live in the sunshine
I've chosen the light.

Topic(s) of this poem: nostalgia, poem

Form: Found Poem


Comments about . I Walk In The Sunshine by Adeline Foster

  • Stephanie Sterlin (6/22/2014 5:14:00 PM)

    Nice poem Adeline i really really really love it, you did great. (Report)Reply

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  • Maya Hanson (5/13/2014 4:32:00 PM)

    Beautiful and optimistic, keep writing! (Report)Reply

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  • Mary Forrester (9/14/2013 1:44:00 PM)

    I like the positivity in this poem (Report)Reply

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  • Dale Mullock (1/3/2013 1:58:00 PM)

    Hi Adeline! You asked me to look at this poem some time ago but I have been absent from this site but I have returned... and found this little gem of poem. This poem is like dancing the quickstep, quick, upbeat and set to keep you on the tip of your toes... leave them in your wake, leave them behind, they are history and your future is bright. New starts, new beginnings and it is 2013, hope that it is a good year for you :) (Report)Reply

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  • Payal Parande (9/13/2012 6:46:00 AM)

    amazing thought mam.i like the way how your words flow like a melody which is simply incredible...
    thank you for sharing
    love,
    payal
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  • Cordell Rich (9/11/2012 10:07:00 AM)

    An sad little poem in a way. The author clearly is interested in the person who lives in the night but if forced to make a choice because of personal principles or values. We all make these types of choices but there is always something sad about them at least to me. (Report)Reply

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  • Kelvin OwusuKelvin Owusu (9/6/2012 8:33:00 AM)

    I love this, nice pretty straight forward very positive (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 4, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 10, 2016


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