I Will Make Words Out Of Dreams Poem by Naseer Ahmed Nasir

I Will Make Words Out Of Dreams

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Look O, traveller
Before dying
Put your dreams
In the care
Of wind and water
I will make words out of dreams.
From the grime of your corpse
I will come to grow flowers!

(Translated by Samina Amjad)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duh Huh 30 March 2009

Thought provoking and very original. Creatively written and deep. A poems poem. Thank you for sharing :)

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Louie -Love & Peace- Levy 30 January 2009

O, Wise Poet, your words are listened with aged dreams left abandoned, neglect of care, friendship sails, un blown of wind upon treasured waters Grime, interment is but Earth's cleansing, Bequeath be this poesy of Love and Peace, Immortal are gifted flowers' fragrance, We are indeed, all travelers on a - Bon Voyage for an Eternity -Deserving collaboration, for your excellent, in-depth felt, spiritual poem ...louie levy Thank you for your review of my, 'A Black Rose' Sir, I am deeply touched,

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Herbert Nehrlich1 30 January 2009

Excellent. So short and yet filled to the brim with depth. H

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Andrew Blakemore 27 January 2009

Really beautiful words, full of hope and promise. Best wishes, Andrew

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Patti Masterman 22 January 2009

Thank you for writing such a beautiful poem, full of peace.

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Ken E Hall 01 February 2010

A dream of a poem...following natures path showing we all help to push up daises! said more tactful ofcourse, ++++10 regards

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Anjali Sinha 17 January 2010

solid depth in this poem corpse--flowers- -10 anjali

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Emma Adamyan 31 October 2009

u`ve already made and they r wonderful. thx for sharing ur dreams and words

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Lillian Thomas 04 June 2009

The images in this poem are creative and thought-provoking. You manage such honesty of vision and economy of words, my friend.

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Sergey Yarutin 10 April 2009

It is possible to esteem somehow this and another in the original?

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