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I Wish

Rating: 4.9
I wish the sun would shine all day,
So I could just relax away,
And on to a recliner climb,
Compose a rhyme
That would be sublime.

I wish the household chores could be,
Automatically done for me,
So when with plenty of time to spare,
I could share,
One moment, rare.
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* Sunprincess * 28 May 2016
.........I love this poem from beginning to end, adding to my favorites :) ?
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Ryson Dsouza 01 March 2016
Overall Wonderful...! ! the last three i loved the most.. your imagination is awesome... I Wish your wishes come true Thats my ultimate wish for you
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Andrew Blakemore 09 May 2008
Great structure a, a, b, b, b. Really helps the poem flow and I loved your words. Andrew x
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Duncan Wyllie 01 April 2006
Wonderfully written, flowed like a gentle stream.You're amazing! Have you heard the song called 'IF I WAS' by Midge Ure, Love Duncan
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Mary Nagy 04 September 2005
Great message Ernestine. I sense that there's a real fighter in you! Sincerely, Mary
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