I wished upon a star tonight
That your future would be bright
A respite from a past of pain,
And you'd have cause to smile again
I wished your countenance would glow
And soften your brow's deep furrow
That, always, you'd have strength and pep,
A jaunty spring define your step.
And then I told that shining star
How great I truly think you are
It seemed to twinkle back at me
As though, on high, it did agree
Hoping for a friend to have experience a better life - one of the best reasons for wising upon a star - a 10
Thank you so much, Carl! Your appreciation is valued tremendously. : -)
If all the stars were made of gold, they would not shine as bright as this poem gives them credence for, a soothing and enchanting work, who ever the individual is who has earned your love as provided us, the readers, a lovely poem.
Kevin, what a sweet and incredible comment! Thank you for making my day! : -)
Such a starry poem that motivates and gives glee! Nice sharing Practicing Poetess! Not less than 10.
Night star will dazzle with bright light. Night star will shine with beauty of self dignity. Wishing for brightness to twinkle is a great aspect of human life. An interesting poem is very beautifully penned.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this was like an arrow straight to the heart (touchng)
Hope that arrow went in nice and easy, Louis! : -) Thanks for commenting!