I Wonder Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

I Wonder

Rating: 5.0


no bird, after singing there..
waits for an appreciation.
no flower seems to be waiting there
posing for picturisation
they go about..and do about theirs naturally
I WONDER
if they would take time to see us
I WONDER
what they would think of our deeds

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 28 January 2009

beautiful craft...i also wonder...if they could only speak, maybe they have more and great wisdom than ours human who thinks...10+++

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Vaibhav Pandey 28 January 2009

such wonderful thoughts.........quite appreciable. 10

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Meggie Gultiano 29 January 2009

you seem to end it this way..I wonder..(just joking, my friend) IBut this simply beautiful

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Indira Renganathan 10 February 2009

Thought provoking...nice write10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 08 February 2009

Very good poem. This has got a nice kick/ a slash on human nature.

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Nithya Raghavan 07 February 2009

it was a poem well written...you are right in conveying that people do things in expectation of a result.

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nice poem.. I like the flow of it nice work Krista

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Miriam Maia Padua 29 January 2009

wonderful share... great observation... they are not like us but they do things with innocence... ...carefree i wonder if we are like them....we are free with any hassles...live life with contentment... if they are like us...then we can make them as our model....10+++++

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