I Wonder Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

I Wonder

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no bird, after singing there..
waits for an appreciation.
no flower seems to be waiting there
posing for picturisation
they go about..and do about theirs naturally
I WONDER
if they would take time to see us
I WONDER
what they would think of our deeds

Wednesday, January 28, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: flower
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 29 January 2009

you seem to end it this way..I wonder..(just joking, my friend) IBut this simply beautiful

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Vaibhav Pandey 28 January 2009

such wonderful thoughts.........quite appreciable. 10

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Catrina Heart 28 January 2009

beautiful craft...i also wonder...if they could only speak, maybe they have more and great wisdom than ours human who thinks...10+++

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Indira Renganathan 10 February 2009

Thought provoking...nice write10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 08 February 2009

Very good poem. This has got a nice kick/ a slash on human nature.

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Nithya Raghavan 07 February 2009

it was a poem well written...you are right in conveying that people do things in expectation of a result.

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nice poem.. I like the flow of it nice work Krista

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Miriam Maia Padua 29 January 2009

wonderful share... great observation... they are not like us but they do things with innocence... ...carefree i wonder if we are like them....we are free with any hassles...live life with contentment... if they are like us...then we can make them as our model....10+++++

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