Iambic Love Poem by Tareq Jalabi
Iambic Love
I n my soul which is distressed
A t all times you have been the best
M iracle that happened to me
B lessed with it, i hope again i`ll be
I who loved you since day one
C annot trade you for even the sun
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P onders my heart in my chest
E verytime i see you in your nest
N othing i do then but stop to see
T hat bird who once belonged to me
A nd write poems not for fun
M ad people seldom on words use pun
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E nded has my poem but i guessed
T o finish it fully shall write the rest
E nter the kitchen of of iambic pentameter
R eading it, you can, hate the food but not the feeder
This is a very good acrostic poem-very lovely sentiment.A ten from me! ! ! ! !
You did really good to write that. I don't think I could.
wonderful acrostic poem about love...thank you for sharing
wow so beautiful and touching 10 <3 ed It! ! !
Blue eyes! ! Poetry is the spontaneous flow of welled up emotions in the heart and the overflow becomes poems delectable to the soul. When you experiment such emotions to fix them in certain parameters like rhymes, meters and bla- bla, the soul of the poem will be lost to technicalities and becomes.pallid and insipid. Don't you ever try that except to please your academicians, or satisfy your curiosity in your quest.. Poet is not at all a scientist seeking the chemistry and physics of human nature. He is a professor of the HEART, and not a Cardiologist. Cheers
Well, the idea is unique, the title is quite catching. You linked one of the most important poetry Characteristics with love, as if you are simply saying, a poet is just human who can fall in love and “write” about it. Well done
i have read you loud and clear, and been moved to tears...........this one my favorite.10+++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I loved the way you set this up! I thought it was pretty cool and creative! It turned out to be really good in the end too. Good write Scale1-10...10!