Tareq Jalabi

Rookie (20\11\1988 / Russian Federation)

Iambic Love

Poem by Tareq Jalabi

I n my soul which is distressed
A t all times you have been the best
M iracle that happened to me
B lessed with it, i hope again i`ll be
I who loved you since day one
C annot trade you for even the sun
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P onders my heart in my chest
E verytime i see you in your nest
N othing i do then but stop to see
T hat bird who once belonged to me
A nd write poems not for fun
M ad people seldom on words use pun
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E nded has my poem but i guessed
T o finish it fully shall write the rest
E nter the kitchen of of iambic pentameter
R eading it, you can, hate the food but not the feeder


Comments about Iambic Love by Tareq Jalabi

  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (11/16/2010 8:36:00 AM)

    wonderful acrostic poem about love...thank you for sharing(Report)Reply

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  • Darkbeauty's Revivedangel (kitty3 ;) Rewr) (10/23/2010 4:18:00 PM)

    wow so beautiful and touching 10 <3 ed It! ! !(Report)Reply

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  • kunjubi Varghesekunjubi Varghese (10/22/2010 9:44:00 PM)

    Blue eyes! !
    Poetry is the spontaneous flow of welled up emotions in the heart and the overflow becomes poems delectable to the soul. When you experiment such emotions to fix them in certain parameters like rhymes, meters and bla- bla, the soul of the poem will be lost to technicalities and becomes.pallid and insipid. Don't you ever try that except to please your academicians, or satisfy your curiosity in your quest.. Poet is not at all a scientist seeking the chemistry and physics of human nature. He is a professor of the HEART, and not a Cardiologist. Cheers(Report)Reply

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  • Ro'ya Abdulaal (9/15/2009 1:08:00 PM)

    Well, the idea is unique, the title is quite catching. You linked one of the most important poetry Characteristics with love, as if you are simply saying, a poet is just human who can fall in love and “write” about it. Well done(Report)Reply

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  • Sherri Coulter (9/12/2009 12:20:00 PM)

    i have read you loud and clear, and been moved to tears...........this one my favorite.10+++++(Report)Reply

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  • Emma Fellers (3/5/2009 11:05:00 AM)

    This is a very good poem! Can't wait till you write another one. ^-^(Report)Reply

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  • Jazzmine Virden (3/5/2009 10:12:00 AM)

    this is an awesome peom i love it!(Report)Reply

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  • Megan R (3/4/2009 7:37:00 PM)

    I loved this poem. The words flowed so well.(Report)Reply

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  • Brenda Tamayo (3/4/2009 4:20:00 PM)

    You understand Iambic Pentameter more than I do. This poem is cute. We are working on acrostic poetry at the moment in my English class. I'm sure my teacher would give you and A+ :)(Report)Reply

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  • Christina Phan (3/4/2009 5:56:00 AM)

    wow
    i luv it
    11+
    keep doing wht u doing(Report)Reply

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  • Lynda Robson (3/4/2009 5:18:00 AM)

    Well penned piece, thanks,
    10
    Lynda xx(Report)Reply

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  • Whitney Nicole Albright* (3/3/2009 7:55:00 PM)

    You did really good to write that. I don't think I could.(Report)Reply

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  • Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (3/3/2009 7:38:00 PM)

    This is a very good acrostic poem-very lovely sentiment.A ten from me! ! ! ! !(Report)Reply

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  • Jasmine B (3/3/2009 6:41:00 PM)

    nice poem....read mind....(Report)Reply

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  • ~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ (3/3/2009 5:55:00 PM)

    I loved the way you set this up! I thought it was pretty cool and creative! It turned out to be really good in the end too. Good write
    Scale1-10...10!(Report)Reply

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  • Evaughn GrayEvaughn Gray (3/3/2009 5:37:00 PM)

    this has a very good flow. i love the way you form your words.. this poem is utterly beautiful on my behalf ~Hazel G.E(Report)Reply

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  • Sarah (3/3/2009 5:21:00 PM)

    this is lyk awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1 great write. u get a 10 from me!(Report)Reply

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  • Rosalita Fernandez (3/3/2009 4:58:00 PM)

    Cleverly done, beautifully written(Report)Reply

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  • Kill Me See If I Care E=m^o-CO+W (3/3/2009 4:58:00 PM)

    something different i like it
    not many people at my school are kids my age learn to appreciate poetry
    but i have
    Its great(Report)Reply

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  • Reshma Ramesh (2/7/2009 11:48:00 PM)

    whoa! ! something new to me...................well done(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 10, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, June 20, 2011