Keep Fighting Poem by Tareq Jalabi
Keep Fighting
as I lie on this cliff
pondering all my thoughts
knowing that there is a God
knowing that there is sin
but still I sin
hating myself for doing it again everyday
wanting to jump off this cliff
still I cant
its as if theres an unknown force guiding me away
still on this cliff thinking about jumping
I stare at the stars
feeling like a speck of dirt
I look off the edge
but turn around because thats not who I am
Id rather keep fighting
than give up on everything
knowing giving up will just send me to hell
but fighting day by day
theres still a slim chance of hope for me
good job...dude such a pretty poem with such a prtty words really i like it especially: I would rather keep fighting than give up on everything knowing giving up will just send me to hell nice man
Gave me goosebumps. So many ppl go through the same exact thing so do not feel alone cuz im right there with ya! Good job!
despair strongwill and hope... all mixed well inside...good expressive write Blue...thanks 10
we all feel guilty when we make sins but we mustn't give up and don't repeat this fault.great writing! ! Merna
sin is an illusion to torment you into guilty pleasures of more sin for those that do not guilt trip themselves find no reason to sin, for you know there is a god then let her fill you with light until sin is something that cannot touch you..you are a powerful thinker never give up the fight to a thought of sin
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
9/23/2023 2:07:23 AM # 1.0.0.1113
Wow, a positife poem, , , I love this, never give up for what we fighting for, Don't die before we finished what we began in this world, Love it! I give you 10..! ! ! Naru Kaede, ,