Keep Fighting Poem by Tareq Jalabi

Keep Fighting

Rating: 4.4

as I lie on this cliff
pondering all my thoughts
knowing that there is a God
knowing that there is sin
but still I sin
hating myself for doing it again everyday
wanting to jump off this cliff
still I cant
its as if theres an unknown force guiding me away
still on this cliff thinking about jumping
I stare at the stars
feeling like a speck of dirt
I look off the edge
but turn around because thats not who I am
Id rather keep fighting
than give up on everything
knowing giving up will just send me to hell
but fighting day by day
theres still a slim chance of hope for me

Cordell Rich 02 September 2008

Been there. Good one.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 08 September 2008

well expressed indeed..............10

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Yasser Koor 16 September 2008

good job...dude such a pretty poem with such a prtty words really i like it especially: I would rather keep fighting than give up on everything knowing giving up will just send me to hell nice man

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Anjali Chandra 22 November 2008

i love this poem. Great job

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Naru Kaede 03 December 2008

Wow, a positife poem, , , I love this, never give up for what we fighting for, Don't die before we finished what we began in this world, Love it! I give you 10..! ! ! Naru Kaede, ,

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Rachael Miroddi 24 May 2009

Gave me goosebumps. So many ppl go through the same exact thing so do not feel alone cuz im right there with ya! Good job!

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Kesav Easwaran 20 May 2009

despair strongwill and hope... all mixed well inside...good expressive write Blue...thanks 10

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Merna Ibrahim 25 January 2009

we all feel guilty when we make sins but we mustn't give up and don't repeat this fault.great writing! ! Merna

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 30 December 2008

I like this poem that you wrote!

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Truthful Light Treeclimber 27 December 2008

sin is an illusion to torment you into guilty pleasures of more sin for those that do not guilt trip themselves find no reason to sin, for you know there is a god then let her fill you with light until sin is something that cannot touch are a powerful thinker never give up the fight to a thought of sin

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Tareq Jalabi

Tareq Jalabi

Russian Federation
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