Identity Crisis Poem by Dee Daffodil

Identity Crisis

Rating: 4.4


To the P.H management....

I've been suffering
A loss of identity lately
I'm sure that you can see
That the person I once was
Is not currently who I be...

I've been feeling slightly odd lately
And I wish that I could say
That I'll be over it quite quickly
But I think I've lost my way...

My bearings are all boggled
And I've gotten all mixed up
Am I really upside down...
Or is it actually downside up? ?

I have no wish to offend thee
But surely you can see
If you give me back my maple leaf
I'll be as happy as can be! !

Dee Daffodil (HW) 11 Sep,2007

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Do you feel naked without it? ! Top write! Ez X

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David Taylor 13 September 2007

Hi Dee very nice Poem, I feel like that sometimes even without the PH management. Love from David

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oh that's funny! (And PH management getting something wrong? No, surely not.... :)) t x

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 11 September 2007

Scoundrels! Too busy padding the stats of the donors! Good On You, Ms. Dee! ~ ~ ~

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Barry Van Allen 11 September 2007

Dee, Your maple leaf is always there, and that's the beauty of the tree, and that P.H. has NOT a thing to do with that, (taking your lead) , your soul is all it be! B.V.A.

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timothy pipper 10 May 2018

this is awful with a capital A and W, F, U, and L

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Nathaniel Booker 05 September 2008

I didn't get it but I got it and I'm glad it came my way, This is truly a fine piece even if written on a dime. Be Well.

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Howard Johnson 17 September 2007

Hi Dee I noticed that, At first I thought there was someone new on ph using your name, I am not sure how a person recieves their flag, It was like one day it started, I asked Doc, He did not know.Though this is a very crafty write, Good to hear from you, , Howard

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Alison Cassidy 15 September 2007

Whoops! I tell a lie. It's not. Silly me. They've given you the stars and stripes instead! And the maple leaf is soooooooooooooooooo pretty too. It's still a cool poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Alison Cassidy 15 September 2007

Dear Dee, I've just checked - it's back. What a delightful ditty though. I do believe your loss might have been worth it - to produce such a masterpiece. Very clever poem. love, Allie xxxx

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