If
the stars were a million guitars playing a rhapsody to the moon
If
the hills were alive with flowers only bowing their heads in a shower
If
the sun shone everyday the black clouds would go away
If only ……
Very well written poem David. If is a word that applies to many aspects of life. Loved it. Hugs Pam
I love this poem David, I really like the last line 'if the sun shone everyday the black clouds would go away'. Excellent write---Melvina---
Makes me want to keep on reading until the sun shines again across your page David Another profound and well-presented piece Love duncan X
What an atmosphere you conjure up with so few words. My hat off to you sire. t x
Short and sweet, but oh, so complete! Nice little poem, David............. Linda :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
if only indeed... the sun would shine... nice short poem david..