If I Die Tonight Poem by Richard Wlodarski
If I Die Tonight
If I die tonight
Will you remember
The blueness of eyes
Surrendering now
To the greenness
Of Heaven above?
Poetess Friend Sandra, THX so much for your very positive constructive criticism!
Excellent mixture of colours, beautiful sad poem since the theme is death, but the greenness of Heaven lifts me up again. Amazingly thought, created and presented. TOP Marks! To my Favourites.5 and myriad Stars added.TFS
Love your very positive constructive criticism, poetess friend. So greatly appreciate the myriad of stars and for adding it to your favourites!
2) THX so very much, Jayne, for adding my poem to your favourites!
We all want to live even through our deaths. Great lesson.5****
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I would like to translate this poem
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This touched my heart Bravo! ! ! !
Whenever one of my poems touches the heart of a fellow poetess/poet, it really makes my day. THX so very much, poetess friend LeeAnn!