If I Should Lose My Soul

dignified piece...mature questions arising....an awakening..touching... .makes me reflect on the thoughts...and... examines my soul on the meaning of my existence here on earth.... ...to have my soul or to lost it..or bargain it...definitely would not......with God's guidance..........10++++++++

Capturing Love how the questions are represented here forces the reader to think and reread over and over

Strong poems and... Very elegantly.... I have seen here a tail snake very seductively... And infinite love to a life... Cheryl, from my 10.... Warmest regards, Tsira

A very interesting piece. Very interesting. Don't know what to make of it. Can't decide. GW62

Live in your soul Not in body Body is full of greed lust and desires. Soul is eternity where your fiance lives.

Thought provoking questions you ask in this write. These lines were the ones that had caused me to stop and think when I read them. might I forget to forgive? Would I still practice in joy that which could just be done? Would I care if you cry? There are many other questions that I could add to the ones you have asked, ones that I do not voice because I am not sure I want to know the answers. Thank you for making me think. Excellent work.

I love the words' in the flick of a serpent's tail? ' It shows the maturity in your writing.good job Cheryl.

Great imagery here.... 'Seeing my reflection in a rodent's eyes and in the flick of a serpent's tail? ' A 10.