~ IF LOVE NOT GIVEN ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
26.09.09
Why fire of tune
Ignite in my soul?
Why lulu love
Deluge you in my soul?
Why glittery starry garland
Decor you on my neck?
Why touch-travel
O’er my soul
Like rill breeze?
Why vermillion red
Nascent Sun God
Gander at me from east?
Why sway me
By bedecking smile
Like refulgent sky?
Why touch me
Like blooming buds
Smiling at me?
How I’ll embosom
Encrypt bind moor
Your vast euphony
Riches rapture rhapsodic
In my wee bosom
If love not given?
Your entire floral love décor
How I’ll keep wreath
If love not
Given in my soul?
Why keep me
Pale placid turbid
Instead florid limpid
If love not
Given in my soul
In towering
Pellucid teemingness?
If love not given…?
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This is the best poem of yours! Poems are an ernest yearning to reach to where we truly belong, and we can be there only when we break the bars of bondage by the fiery insane emotions of love and freedom which is verily expressed in the beautiful poem of urs. Many Thanks for sharing.10++++
Why fire of tune Ignite in my soul? Why lu......... ------------- Only because, you are in love! This is the only answer to all questions in this poem, I dare to tell..A lover's mind is full of questions with No proper answer! ! Nice reading...
Written with poetic zeal. Your flair for the dramatic carries the day. Excellent write. Warm regards, Sandra
Excess of emotion destroys a poem. Emotion must be controlled. But I must say you have poetic genius.
If Love is not Given...could you taste the love? it seems like u taste it deeply, and if love is not given and how could write this sweet poem? ...because u know how love is, and how did u know how love is? because love is given to you...love always has place in pure heart, Like this poem!
u are an interesting writer and its great to know your style
Amazingly sweet poetry… spumes dousing of emotion is dulcet… mellifluous… honeyed ‘Your entire floral love décor How I’ll keep wreath If love not Given in my soul? ’… Indeed love to be kept wreathed in soul…to rejoice…it’s the body that doesn’t love we for but …readers are better learned than me to interpret this poem… 10++ Dr. V
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Flow of love continues through resiprocation.If the humand bond is bereft of love from one end, disruption occurs.Wonderful write, choice of words has a uniqueness.