If You Were The Breeze! Poem by Romeo Della Valle

If You Were The Breeze!

Rating: 5.0


I see the light approaching,
The earth is rumbling
And the wind is too strong...

I know,
Your momentum is great,
My question left no traction
For equivocation...

Be swift,
If you must blow me away,
Remove me completely
From the ground's attachment...

But, if your breath is sweet,
Kiss me a thousand times
And I will raise a flag to honor
The breeze...


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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicated to E.R.A.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 31 July 2012

Hall of fame -E il vento è troppo forte...La brezza--magnanimous write again

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Jenna Chryste 25 July 2012

Wonderful poem. Can't find words to describe how I feel about the first stanza... it's just beautiful ;) ~Jenna [333

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Cool breeze...touching poem

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Valerie Dohren 22 July 2012

Beautiful Romeo, love the closing stanza which is so captivating and full of imagination. Definitely a 10! !

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