A vacuum when one was ignoring me,
Thanks, when again one is souring me,
He with bottle of vinegar,
Me with a spoon of sugar,
Mixture of the two isn't boring me.
What a combination, Akhtar Sahab! A bottle of vinegar with a spoon of sugar! Never tasted it, so i do not know it. But, as you have pointed out in a subtle way, it could be be sour or tangy. So it's best ignored....... :) Surely,5 Stars
'He with bottle of vinegar, Me with a spoon of sugar, Mixture of the two isn't boring me.' - That's good!
Clever thoughts wonderfully versified. Sugar will always tame any kind of taste. Witty and well conveyed write.
A well authored poem. Truly fantastic and poetic...5 stars*****
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A wonderful write sir! Thanks for sharing...Top score