Immortality Poem by Lisel Mueller

Immortality

Rating: 3.0


In Sleeping Beauty's castle
the clock strikes one hundred years
and the girl in the tower returns to the world.
So do the servants in the kitchen,
who don't even rub their eyes.
The cook's right hand, lifted
an exact century ago,
completes its downward arc
to the kitchen boy's left ear;
the boy's tensed vocal cords
finally let go
the trapped, enduring whimper,
and the fly, arrested mid-plunge
above the strawberry pie
fulfills its abiding mission
and dives into the sweet, red glaze.

As a child I had a book
with a picture of that scene.
I was too young to notice
how fear persists, and how
the anger that causes fear persists,
that its trajectory can't be changed
or broken, only interrupted.
My attention was on the fly:
that this slight body
with its transparent wings
and life-span of one human day
still craved its particular share
of sweetness, a century later.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
William Goldman 08 May 2014

In the best of these poems, something dangerous, disturbing, hovers beneath the words - this is not surprising when you reflect on her life & background. This quality helps to give the poems just enough complexity and potential contradiction to make them beautiful.

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Colleen Courtney 17 May 2014

Starts like a fairytale and ends on a disturbing but honest epiphany....another great poem by the poet.

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Max Reif 31 August 2005

Another sublime poem! I hope to read all of your. Wonderful!

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Siddartha Montik 17 December 2016

Made me look at that God again and Again! thank you for sharing! ! ! 10+++! ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 December 2016

One human day! Thanks for shsring this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 February 2020

this slight body with its transparent wings and life-span of one human day still craved its particular share of sweetness, a century later. immortality and the sharing sweetness of a dream like attitude., tony

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Tom Allport 17 December 2016

every thing has its purpose and time will not stop it

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M Asim Nehal 17 December 2016

Brilliant poem. A descriptive assessment of the situation.

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Glen Kappy 17 December 2016

wow, people! notice how this poem which begins with reference to a fairy tale, to something of lesser consequence, ends with a profound note and a surprise. -glen kappy

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 December 2016

Thanks for sharing++++++++++++++++

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