Immortality In Memory Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Immortality In Memory

Rating: 5.0


No pigeon in my hand cage as wheat eater
It's far away now except the white feather
Eat; eat but assorting good one for the health
She tells it as the emblem of peace to be wealth
She goes and I go too, she comes back and I too
She flaps and I sweep, she flies and I grow up low
She picks up from the clean pot and I look after all
Queen of quills she offers and I keep behind the doll

Now, it becomes fairy wings with embroidered loom
Now the grain of stagnation dries up in mite's dome
The cage of words swarm on the memory of thriving
Slowly, timer zone show the end line of everything
In the groove of winds recycles the life and death
Simultaneously the thought is alive is grateful fate


© Mahtab Bangalee
27January,2022
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
BRITTE NINAD 13 February 2022

beautiful imaginable loving poem penned

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Moore Noore 08 February 2022

superb and imaginative poem penned. I think your pigeon is didactic figure in this poem. I appreciate your thoght

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Sultan Deen 07 February 2022

Really that'a metaphorica poem penned by you. So thoughtful and thought ariser. I love it

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 28 January 2022

A thoughtful poem Mahtab, Welcome back.5****

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 January 2022

An excellent poem in abstract metaphor and deep muse. Kudos! Plz do read and comment on my newsest poem too titled, 'The ravishing rain'

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