...Immortalize Men Poem by Eyan Desir
...Immortalize Men
Their candles blow away
Their memories we hold
Decades after they go
River of Persistence
Determination!
Great meditation
Flows within their blood
Only a few were meant
For eternal greatest
Hundreds of soul have tried
Many jawbones fall short
Only souls that hunger!
To reach perfection
Or has a heart of fire
Only the ones that are
Driven with passion
Like a raging lion
Has the force to break
Adversity's teeth
They alone will fall
In the pool of greatest
And will be remember
As Immortalize men!
copyright ©
yes, we immortalize good memories, especially of our loved ones. i think you're very loving and passionate. feels good to read something like this. keep it up.: -)
eyan, good write, i like the idea of immotal man but for sure immortalization comes from God. Keep up the good work I liked it very much.
Yeah, very effective words....moral boost for every person who feel down and out..thank you very much for inviting me Love Dr....quite a psychaitrist I shud say 10++
this poem has a power to inspire people... really beautiful and interesting... yet i was truly intregued by the title and the way you mentioned the title at the last.... very impressive... i liked it infact loved it...10+++
Immortality is a power to hold with greatness and humility under the viel of divinity...fabulous piece.10+++
Human being existence is only a blow in the cosmic eternity.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
12/5/2025 5:44:18 AM # 1.0.0
ahh this poem is well made my friend. i think its wonderful