I think of freedom in my thoughts,
But these thoughts never want me to be free.
They want me to obey them forever,
They want me to seek consultant from them
Whenever I want to be free.
It’s just like trying to escape a prison,
After telling the jailor all about your plans
So let it be
Tell your thoughts that you love staying in their imprisonment
And then you will eventually be Free.
veryyyyyyyy nice... its a fact that thoughts actually can't leave u.... so a good write diiii.........
thoughts can never leave you and you cant get freed from thoughts ever.nice write.
sweet and crisp poem its my honour to invite you to read my poems and comment i am waiting
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I would like to translate this poem
Wow! An amazing analogy you have written ma'am! Its a paradox, yet a sweet paradox! But the thoughts collectively makes you, you!