Your love gnaws at my heart
And leaves it in a silent ache.
In a silent ache, my heart bleeds
Your memories ooze out
Into a little nothingness.
I know your condition, dearest,
O' my love, either is not different
Nights have become sleepless
Your choicest food has lost its taste
And hunger has left without a trace.
I can imagine, since we met last
How lean have you become,
Like waning moon in Krishna paksha
And paler than the new moon rising at dawn
With your love for me, in his waxing cresent.
this reads like a beautiful sonata, so lovely and heart-aching. Tis good to read after a long dry and lonely spell - - 10++ my friend!
A poignant theme captured beautifully. Love and loss are depicted with great expression and spontaneity. Kudos!
Love inflict such wounds on the hearts, that the pain is so soothing. Thank you, Nosheen.
A poignant write. The power of love has been vividly depicted in this heart rending write. Very touching verses with superb imagery.
Thank you for your words of appreciation. Obliged
silent ache oh in heart; silence gnaws passionately! ah injured there deadly! silence in love groan of pigeon couple while we think this sound of love where the rhythm of momentary separation brings unsolicited burning scar inside! ! ! !
Hi Dear Poet, I am at loss of words. What a swell of poetry. Before your poetic comments, my lines are almost worthless. So beautifully done. My heart goes out to you, Sir.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Like waning moon in Krishna paksha.....the kernel of this poignant love poem. Liked the second stanza the most.....5 stars.