In That Pleasing Place She And Me Poem by sarwar chowdhury
In That Pleasing Place She And Me
Unseen untouched affaire de Coeur stinging Oh what I would do …..the ocean of pain her burble… cool hot cool hot waves..soaked by love I say.. She sounds Fun…..in the air bang thud thud by the gun! .....Her fragranced the elite room Of heart despite breathtaking….placed she dearly me there and sing..Love song that’s a stunning poem the Annabel Lee by Allan poe..Where inputed lovely woe..Eyes are full of tears..pierce pierce..Thrust..bubbles burst…my heart sounds darling darling…!
Hi
…In
…..Thy
…..…Heart’s
………elite
…………Room
………………It’s
……………….....I!
………………….In that not spacious pleasing place
………………….Beyond belief things case-by-case.
………………….Salvador Dali’s paintings talk to me-
………………….Arts are creating arts dear pal see
………………….Sylvia plath’s tearful eyes encompass
………………….Things some come to come, pass to pass!
………………….As virtuoso painter's whimsical touch a must!
………………….We are nothing except part of tiniest dust!
Dude..
She calls
I am
Spellbound!
Feel
Good.
Sculptures
Pure
Nude.
The
Window
Of her heart..Oh!
Let me take a part..Let the
World know the fact…the window
Interconnect… A baby universe of translucent
Beauties..where breeze..coming from wonderland of Alice!
I am lost into in… myself there, too, has been..within no time Appear
surprising scene…I become a little boy…..impish even so good hence She gave a toy! ..Hugged she me so sweet..Am squeezed to happy quite! ... Shy goes far…face mine hide into bosom her! ..Ah! the scented floral her bed in the room seems just nothing..Me compelled to say-hey baby! We are in A to Z…..witness the rose red!
A highly creative write taking the reader on a entertaining ride.10+++
this is indeed a stunning write, my friend..Well crafted..
A to Z, nothing in between........ symbols float........great poetic shots........all sounds melt..........all forms dissolve........all shackles of the language break.........in that pleasing place she and me communicate. Sarwar, it is written in a fine poetic frezy with multiple experiments in structure. Kudos for your inventive skill. CP[
very cool design and format! Creative ideas! Nice words! Nice formation! Very well penned!
What a journey of falling in love- an amazement like that of Alice in Wonderland. You seem to have lost in 'that Pleasing Place. It was good fun to read this pleasant poem.
The passion, the rapture, the capture of your heart :) So differently said.
An exceptional write from you here Sarwar, every line kept me interested, 10 Lynda xx
This was a wonderful piece. So full of imagery and I like the way you layed it out here. It made it fun to read as well. Excellent job.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 4:11:59 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Wow, first I would like to echo Mamta's comments, it is a poem of many things. Did I fall down a rabbit hole, to fall into a magical dream filled with masterpieces of art that float past my eye, or was it my desire gone beserk. 10+