In The Middle Poem by krissi b'williams

In The Middle

Rating: 5.0
 


THE WORDS me n u was then, the word 'us' is now
the relationship doesnt seem true
when in it its always, i, me, never we any how...you
we have 2 meet in the middle...
give it all, not just a little
its a lot, its not simple
it has to be...you n me...the word we......and us
every single day 4m dawn to dusk
we fight n we argue..we both feel
we laugh, we cuss, get angry, but thats
what makes us real
the simplicity n tough tasks

if it were so easy, everyone would be in love
they wouldnt have to search to find that special 1
we'd just meet any person, and in love like whoa
doesnt that sound like a stupid concept, cuz thats not the way love workks nor goes....and so
when 1 of us is seeing a problem, the other my be blind
n when 1 of is sane, the other seems out of their mind
when we fight is a battle ever won
after the war has been fought
did it really settle anything
or just bring up nasty words, hurt feelings, n unwanted thoughts

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bhaswat Chakraborty 27 June 2009

I find genuine depth in your lines, '...what makes us real the simplicity n tough tasks if it were so easy, everyone would be in love...' So, despite your modesty, I'll request you to keep writing good poetry....10...

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true words about true love..very well expressed friend...

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Eyan Desir 25 June 2009

I also hate relationship with ups and downs I believe if ppl are open and understanding there will be less promblems good write full marks

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