In The Mist Poem by anais vionet

In The Mist

Rating: 5.0


We decided to take a walk.
If the moon and stars still existed,
they were hidden behind clouds.

Then a fog hit us like a wave, a cloud
that had run out of gas and crashed on us,
to further shrink the perceptible world.

Ordinary, walking people became vague
phantoms that could loom, in film noir
black and white out of the fog,
suddenly sharpen and colorize,
only to disappear again in moments.

Sounds, out of sync, or garbled, came sharply
from odd angles, turning that fifth sense unreliable.
Noises, at first muted, were abruptly amplified as
if the hand of that ghostly vapor ran a soundboard.

A man, moving in stalker-like silence, clops,
like a clydesdale on cobblestone as he passes close.

I half expected a distant fog horn to announce
the passing of a ghost ship where all be welcome.

In The Mist
Tuesday, February 1, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: fog,ghostly,teen
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
a campus walk turned ghostly
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shreya Hacks 02 February 2022

Love to be on that ghost ship, nice poem.

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Linda Bella Wassermeister 01 February 2022

I love this! Your writing is superb!

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David Wood 01 February 2022

Sometimes the fog is internal, that's a time to worry.5* poem with good imagery.

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anais vionet

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Paris, France
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