In The Skies.(A Haiku) Poem by Rebecca Navarre

In The Skies.(A Haiku)

Rating: 4.5


Lightning bugs, pass by.
In the night, under moon bright.
Love the way, you fly.

Sunday, July 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: awe,beauty,nature,wonder
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 04 August 2017

I have to believe that you and Haiku are made for each other! ! ! This captures your love of nature both heavenly and the creatures below.. You are very diligent to pick out the words that paint a picture and a tone and follow the Haiku structure at the same time. This poem is so delicately radiantly lovely. Nailed the form- imparted essence of night flight. 10++++++++++++++++++ and a spot on my Favs

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Rebecca Navarre 05 August 2017

Thank You! ! ! For Such A Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Has A Way That, Captures The Heart So...Like Beautifully Deep Skies, So Gold! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! ! Had Added Yours To In My Favs Too! ! ! ! ! :)

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Unwritten Soul 04 August 2017

Another sweet and gentle write, love it Rebecca!

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Rob Lamberton 24 May 2025

Lighting bugs are captivating! Thanks for a captivating poem!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 February 2022

Love the way, you fly.....a simple, sweet, soft and light little poem.

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Unnikrishnan E S 12 February 2022

Beautiful. In so few words, you have captured the entire beauty of night….

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 August 2017

under the moon light, you fly............ so nice a poem, simple in its content but conveys a lot. thankyou dear poet. tony

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Rebecca Navarre 07 August 2017

Thank You! ! ! Dr. Tony, You Are Very Kind! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Beautifully Inspiring To Hearts And Minds! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 August 2017

In the night! ! With the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rebecca Navarre 07 August 2017

Thank You! ! ! Edward, For Such A Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! You A Very Amazing And Wonderful Poet! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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