In The Third Person.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

In The Third Person....

Rating: 5.0


This BIO is in the third person

she was born out of love
grew up in an intimate sphere of love
went to privatebasic school,
the teachers received her with love,
she continued on junior-senior high,
enrolled at the faculty of law

fell in love
with a very handsome boy
but alas, he fell in love with another,
deepest grief, her teenage love,
she didn't bother,
she fell in love with another,
enrolled at a university
the rights department,
mom's deepest wish,
there came another bliss,
a very intelligent man came into her life,
asked her to be his wife,
he asked her to study literature,
since he was fully occupied with medical insights,
she....literature? !
this looked like an error
without mental terror
but
a numerus fixus
had to do pré-exams first,
greatest luck needed
yes! She succeeded!
from then on her study just started,
she had to learn 5 years long,
after this pleasant but difficult education,
continued with graduation day
hooray!
Celebrations followed after celebrations,
in the meantime,
although still at a very young age,
she was engaged
all the time they were in love
they believe in the only God above,
they are still enjoying
their enchanting life, admiring each other's love,
adoring him and her,
their life long,
still singing their mutual song:
in God we trust,
redemption and forgivenness and true love,
is a must,

Now in the first person plural form

we say our prayer
to the only God,
on this spot
or elsewhere....

© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Anno Domini Friday 3 July 2020 - Dutch Noon

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
we say our prayer
to the only God,
on this spot
or elsewhere....

© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Anno Domini Friday 3 July 2020 - Dutch Noon
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 03 July 2020

Ow Great It's love Just love panacea Only pure love can do it For the love.... Medical science learner converted INTO Literature science learner (I Think literature is the mother of all learning) And now enjoying life under the mercy of God Happily.....

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 July 2020

Respected Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir, thank you so much for your honest and complete response, very touching to hear your frank opinion, indeed she had beautified life with motivational love of God. From the bottom of my heart, I thank you so very much for these associations after having read my BIO-poem in the third person. Your great and honest support is constantly an important reason for me to stay. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved épousse..

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 July 2020

Dear Rev. Bernard, thank you so much for your ardent compliment and your precious 10+. Dear Kesav Sir, thank you a very lot for your valuable compliment and your worthy and kindest comment.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 July 2020

A well penned impressive poem. Simply fabulous.....10+

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Kesav Easwaran 04 July 2020

Nice bio poem Sylvia. Wish them both a long happy love life! (:

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 July 2020

Starting from birth to enrollment of her name in university she was trained, graced and motivated by love and God's greatest love played a major role in building her career. She was genius and clever. She had kept trust on God and beautified life with motivational love of God. She realized about true love, trust on God and trust on self and nature. This poem is very interesting and excellently penned...10

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Sylvia Frances Chan

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Jakarta, Indonesia
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