Inwaiting. Poem by Bharati Nayak

A fascinating poem! Delightful poetic expression filled with poetic beauty beckoning a sweet promise of love! I liked the third stanza most.........................10

Love has given much patience to wait. After a long day's waiting a temporary break is taken by stopping this but still there is hope that moment of arrival and meeting will come with lovable memories. Sweet melodies and wonderful gifts are received emotionally. Dear has given promise to meet before sunset and we hope he will come. He will promise to stand near love. His sudden coming will give surprise. An excellent poem is well penned on life and love...10

Waiting needs value, Nice to share mam.10p

Good..Thnks for sharing.....

Nice poem...........................................

very good suspense will he ever come but hopes remain in GOD'S DOMAIN may be he will change his mind and come GOD BLESS YE O POETESS well done

Waiting for a loved one though he did not come but love makes one still hopeful. A nice picture of human sentiments.

Good poem and thanks to share it.impressive work and we'll penned.

'Promise me To stand by my side And hold my hands Before I melt into the fading light At the horizon's end. '..is a the most beautiful stanza here. Emotionally powerful poem. Loved the simple way you have spilled your feelings.10+++

A nice write...... . ..... Naila