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Inability

Rating: 4.6

I can't make a contact with someone I love and miss
.. And I weep
The One Who stays in space and in hearts Who lives
.. Very deep

Monday, August 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: almighty,thought
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Osazee Dankaro 14 August 2017

Hello Ali, your poems are really great. Short and deeply thoughtful. You have a really great insight. Keep this up.

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Mj Lemon 13 September 2017

This gem is right from the heart. I can feel the emotion in these words. I can also relate to how the tears seem to draw a companion closer.

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Valsa George 17 August 2017

We often fail to connect with God though He resides within our hearts! About this inability, though we are sad, we fail repeatedly to renew our connections with the Almighty! Profound thoughts!

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Unwritten Soul 15 August 2017

Dear, God always with you..us as well..it doesnt mean we cant directly meet as we meeting friends face to face we cant be with it. through prayer and rememberance we can meet Him. Dont cry if you cant contact someone you love and miss, pray for your beloved ones..may that one will always remember you in prayer too...it sounds so sad but to reunite is nothing impossible, if it doest here, not after. Love the poem and sentiment here, i feel so pure..loved it! smile a bit :) i mean be happy too..

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Nosheen Irfan 15 August 2017

A beautiful spiritual write. Sometimes in the rush of worldly life, we are unable to connect with our spiritual needs. But peace can only be found in the presence of God. A big 10.

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Shakil Ahmed 14 August 2017

nice feeling, very exciting and romantic, thanks for sharing.

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