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Rating: 4.3

Not before eyes
Fog, we have
Among our lives...

Monday, January 6, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life,social
Not a Winter poem.
Aniruddha Pathak 15 January 2020

Yes, the wintry fog disappears under sun, or in wind... but not the fog in our mind and life may not. well said.

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Mj Lemon 07 January 2020

There is both literal and figurative fog. I read this poem and thought about the notion of being alone in a crowd. A superb verse, Ali. Very profound.

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Unwritten Soul 07 January 2020

Close your eyes, is it make a different for you... Because either one u still can see ahead in front of u... But you can see more than eyes can see. This isolation, we can live around thousand people but we still have our soul alone in the world, it can be powerful way to manage views, because we put less boundary to refine it.

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Valsa George 31 March 2020

Though this poem was written sometime ago, it has greater relevance now as we are passing through a period of forced isolation! Actually there is no fog before our eyes, but our lives have turned foggy. We cannot see or guess what is happening in the outside world.

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Susan Williams 23 January 2020

sometimes we inflict fog on ourselves, other times people inflict it on us because they are weary or wary or tremendously troubled. I really like this piece- it made me think. 10+

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Bharati Nayak 20 January 2020

When there is fog before our eyes, we can not see ihings clearly.Yes, there are certain things like doubt, fear, lie or misunderstanding that block our clear perception. A powerful three liner, thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 January 2020

It is the depth of your three-liner that I think brought me back to your poem, dear poet.

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Akhtar Jawad 17 January 2020

Society is badly affected by a fog and the sun is weak and feeble. We need a real sunrise.

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