Infection. Poem by David Wood

Infection.

Rating: 4.9


Another day sitting on my sofa
Looking at the Buddha statue
Serenely sitting in the middle
Of my mantlepiece.

The four walls have enclosed me
For the last five days.

I watch people outside walking
By with a sense of direction
In their busy day

As I am stuck in solitude.

The infection is nearly over but
It is the antibiotics that's
Making me run a slow race.

They render my body as a
Dizzy frozen ice sheet, coughing

Like a ships fog horn sailing
Through the mist of a foggy
Brain.

Slowly the day melts into
Evening and later a welcoming
Night.

Two days to go.

Tuesday, January 25, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: illness,frustration,boredom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soran M. H 25 January 2022

Beautiful and rare IMAGERY The poet looks from his solitude to the outside world and was able to express his feelings in creative poetic images SUCH AS a ships fog horn sailing, Dizzy frozen ice sheet inspired by his many travels, thank you for your EXCELLENT WORK that deserves 5 *

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David Wood 25 January 2022

Thank you Soran for your lovely comments

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 25 January 2022

Dave I feel the way. I was the only one in the house without Covid. And felt yr solitude

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Soran M. H 25 January 2022

They render my body as a Dizzy frozen ice sheet, coughing Like a ships fog horn sailing Through the mist of a foggy Brain.

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Soran M. H 25 January 2022

The infection is almost over It's antibiotics It makes me run a slow sprint.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 26 January 2022

Loneliness in the daylong, nothing is to be friend except the imaginative thinking

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Anjandev Roy 26 January 2022

Another fantastic work.....thanks for sharing....

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Ruta Mohapatra 26 January 2022

So well expressed, David! Two days to go and then it will be over, thankfully!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 January 2022

A beautiful poem with great metaphors, compelling images and wonderful poetic expressions. I concur with the comments of Poet Soran.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 January 2022

Social isolation due to illness makes us ponder on some things in life and enable us to see people in their daily activities. To be alone with our thoughts sometimes we learn new things.

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