.inhale Poem by Linda Moore
.inhale
High on the Natural, all else pales
In the splendor of feeling, inhale
The breath going out, it commences
A balm, soothing the senses
Winter painted a picture on the window pane
Enjoying this half eaten Candy Cane
A roaring fire, the smell of Knotty Pine
In the luxury of feeling I incline
Heart is humming a merry tune
With all that is good I commune
How delightful. For some reason the atmosphere your describe is one of good news that all to share.
The flowing rhymes are simply delightful....This piece shares so much gentleness surrounding the reader with the warmth of your poetic heart.....beautiful
Such a warm poem Linda. I like your style of penning. I give this write a 10.
Heart is humming a merry tune With all that is good I commune......... Very ASTONISHING verses Ms. Linda......An excellent explanation of experience you grasped.....Especially the last two lines are really well-written describing the fairness of your heart...absolute 10....Best Regards.....
I love it. I love the rhyme and the flow of it. I love the warm feel of it. Great job, Linda. Warm regards Ron
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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i like this a lot very unique great piece