Innocent Dead Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

Innocent Dead

Rating: 5.0


HEART TO HEART
clasped and cuddled
the mother and baby
lay there in dust
no music heard
their heart never bate

the picture in newsprint
amidst a shamble
an attack from air
oh god death you give i thought
is war..your new weapon
loads and loads of innocent dead

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lola Montez 12 November 2012

Dal Al Traffico fino alla velocità massima Di cui % Utilizzato Di cui % Residuo 21 ottobre 2012 20 novembre 2012 5 GB 87.0% 13.0%

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Lola Montez 12 November 2012

Dal Al Traffico fino alla velocità massima Di cui % Utilizzato Di cui % Residuo 21 ottobre 2012 20 novembre 2012 5 GB 87.0% 13.0%

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Rajnish Manga 12 November 2012

Th poem shows the price of life during war where the weapons are unable to tell friend from foe, innocent from the culprit. frozen tragedy.

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Babatunde Aremu 12 November 2012

Very touching. Death is cheap through weapons of wars. Great

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Antonio Liao 10 November 2009

like tears that just fall to the ground....and the sun still hot as the meadow watch curtailing the night setting down the aisle.....thanks for the reminder of life...God bless...a 10 +

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 12 November 2014

Congratulations Samanyan Lakshminarayanan....Loads and loads of innocent dead are occurring in the war as well as poor zones of the world...very touching...

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Liliana ~el 12 November 2013

Deep

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Lyn Paul 12 November 2013

Who would think that we would still be seeing greed and hatred in this century. It is insane and such a disgrace that these innocent lives mean so little to those killing. Thank you, you have expressed so well

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Babatunde Aremu 12 November 2013

Heart rendering. Natural disasters are devastating. This is well captured in this poem. Good job

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And we thought death was only a serpent in the grass Well, it can rain from above, bombs from the sky so blue Men have invented things that fly not for peace alas But in wars to deliver fire and destruction to the very edge of doom All ye reading this, I welcome you to my page too....

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