Innocent Rose! Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Innocent Rose!

Rating: 4.6


Hark! thou art in this momment,
Dancin' in love and merriment,
On the bosom of a lone land,
When my life in such a futile sand,
Trying slowly to commence
All its worries to condense
Oh! wilt thou bloom in my garden;
To bring that glorious spring
Unto my life this time, 's if Eden.
Beloved! singest thou a love-song
To ease all my woelful burden.
Lo! roses bloom on our bosom,
But we're loved by only some
And then in dreams we breathe in
Until they erode all our corlas in vain.
Oh! 'tis a new dawn; so be close!
As thou art an 'innocent rose'
Let thy love solace all my woes! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sahara Adhikari 09 December 2011

gr8.. u play gr8 with words..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 December 2011

For me now thou art an 'innocent rose'.... lovely and beautiful lines....10

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Jacob Ribald 10 December 2011

This poem is amazing, I shall definitely continue to read your poems.

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Malaya Roses 11 December 2011

Love is the human's reflection over care and possessiveness towards something or someone but sometimes... its hurts and bleed us dry... But the poet is really know how to make us think about flower and forgotten about the thorns. Excellent! ! !

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Binish Cd 12 December 2011

dear friend, your poem innocent rose is a fine work. nice poem. regards binish

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Heather Wilkins 27 August 2013

beautiful poem about the innocent rose. so lovely will she bloom in your garden

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Allemagne Roßmann 29 September 2012

This is where in poetry fantasy blows the mind away..Superb write and cornerstone

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Ken E Hall 27 December 2011

The icon of love the rose so eloquently used in this poem and the reader is enchanted nice...regards

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Jacqui Broad 23 December 2011

Upon reading this again, it's as if you're asking your loved one to please treat you gently. You've had your heart broken many times, but with her it's a new dawn, and she's like an innocent rose, blooming for the first time. She's the only one you need in your garden, the flower you'd tenderly care for. Truly a beautiful poem, Vipins.

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Salema Khatun 17 December 2011

nice nice nice poem ienjoyed it

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