Inspired! Poem by Sandra Feldman
Inspired!
When, I'm inspired
It's like fire
Going thru my veins,
An enraptured feeling
Very hard, to explain.
Not only
When I write
But so much so,
When I read
A poem
That can carry
Me away,
That so generously
Gives me,
Love and hope
So, I can love
And hope,
Thru, another day.
So, I can feel
That man is not
Completely
Rotten,
For,
As long as
Poetry, Love
And Art,
Have something
Kind and beautiful
To say,
All is not lost
And hope lives
True,
For another day.
You use far too many commas! Remove the ones in lines one and five. I will look at the other stanzas later.
May I take this opportunity to thank you for all your wonderful comments on my Poem, Winter's Grip. I feel honored and you gave me inspiration as always.
To one who has a beautiful heart and mind can truly express these beautiful and heartfelt words. Very, very touching and inspiring. With a heart just like you, life is more beautiful and wonderful. To my Poem List.
So very true. So very true. When we are inspired it can fuel us to reach our own star
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/7/2024 3:45:32 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Great poem Sandra! Well done x
You also need a comma after the second word!