Somewhere within your loving look I sense,
Without the least intention to deceive,
Without suspicion, without evidence,
Somewhere within your heart the heart to leave.
"Somewhere within your heart the heart to leave." Eloquent.
Short and sweet beautifully penned poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
a subjective feeling...but all about objects and abstract ideas and feelings of concrete hearts of concrete human beings.... a lovely and realistic understanding...
Oh! This was lovely even though.it presaged the leave-taking that he sensed. Really captured my attention to your excellent attributes as a poet, Vikram Seth
Beautiful. Keen observation of unspoken feelings....only felt by heart.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Deception comes in many forms, and spews all languages as well!