Into My Skin Poem by Manonton Dalan

Into My Skin

Rating: 3.5


tossing petals
downwind
attracts wing hunters
thought of crums
from morning leftover

i keep to myself
words spoken
that you and me heard
rousing giggles beneath those palms
within unblinking eyes
of a raven

i loosen my laces
letting my shoes fall
feeling sharp stubs of grass
sending painful
stings to my brain

like those new manicured
fingernails
of yours
digging into my skin

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tatianna Rei Moonshadow 20 December 2008

I love the last two stanzas of this piece, very vivid.

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June Feir-Cruz 17 September 2008

Wow! AP - this is a bit risque - but awesome and sexy! !

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Manonton Dalan

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