Is That All-Right With You Dear........... Poem by Sebastine Humaemo

Is That All-Right With You Dear...........

Rating: 5.0


(Guy)

In my heart let me say
the one who live is just you
all the nights I just pray
and my soul goes in search for you
from the day... you left...I been falling for you
you know what......my love.....is always soo true

Is that allright with you...
just say me a word what you think of me
Is that allright with you...
don't keep silent let me hear your voice
Is that allright with you...
before I get torn away just make it clear
Is that allright with you.........

(Girl)

Like your heart I too cry
but its fate which makes me move
all the nights I too walk
with tears in eyes like a morning dew
guess... at the wrong time...our love was put through
its a small....crime....and the fate gives no excuse

Is that allright with you...
just give me depart let me move
Is that allright with you...
don't cry for me just search a new life
Is that allright with you...
atleast pray that we meet again in heaven
Is that allright......Is that allright....... with youuuu.......ohhh! ! !


Just my body moves but still I leave my soul
Is that allright with you...
dont cry its not our fault....just fate plays
Is that allright with you...
even if I gone away, you will be my love
Is that allright......Is that allright........with youuuu.......ohhh! ! !


(Both)

Its allright dearrrrrrrr......
please dont move away, let me take you with me
no its allright dearrrrrrrrr....
ohh! just wait let me share more words with you
no its allright dearrrrrrrrr....
ohh! I can't see you moving with tears filled eyes
no its allright.....its allright.......its allright..... am gonnaaa moveeeee
ohhhhhhhhhhh noooooooooooooo........



Inspiration - ' 9 crimes - by Damien Rice'
(the tone of this song influenced me......)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rago rago 16 February 2009

simply great. Really great.

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Tess Macapagal 11 February 2009

'S dat all ryt with you DEAR...............if a call u a great poet that i know.Your poem so romantic for lovers, good in lips to read............ so sweet like honey u wrote in god's mistake! keep writing morepoes sebastine, iam proud of you.I'll read your poems wherever iam.

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Kesav Easwaran 11 February 2009

'all the nights I too walk with tears in eyes like a morning dew'... lines these...emotional expressive...i liked most in this write...good poetic dialogue, Sebastine...10

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Catrina Heart 05 February 2009

Nice poetic dialogue of two lovers.....well framed...10

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sumaira .....ir 05 February 2009

beautifully pictured the theme i also love that music...... love it 10/10

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