It’s A Voyage Full Of Risk Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

It’s A Voyage Full Of Risk



it’s a voyage full of risk
something valuable is there
even when we’re in danger
no worry because I'll save you
with this overflowing courage
in our very hearts, we keep fight
rolling on the gray thunder
surpassing the blurry future
for the everlasting fate
seeking the door yet unseen

(dedicated to a great poet, Ms.Maxine Hong Kingston)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajaram Ramachandran 18 September 2009

A voyage full of risk though leads to an adverture, is worth undertaking to save someone dear to us.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 September 2009

Life is a roller coaster.

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Louis Rams 19 September 2009

with courage in your heart, there is no wall that you can not part.

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Ravi A 18 September 2009

A fine understanding of the heart of others.

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A fine dedication Ahmad. Life can be an adventure and risk taking is worth taking to get the results. love Karin

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Beauty Philosophy 18 September 2009

A whorthwhile voyage despite the risks...since the heart is ready to fight, one must carry on... Good write.

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Joseph Poewhit 18 September 2009

Some people walk upstream, instead of going with the river flow.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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