Sanjukta Nag

Gold Star - 21,168 Points (05-07-1992 / India)

It's Not Fiction - Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Disappeared through the fabric of curtains,
Worst dream of yesterday
And the sorrows I dug out from night's womb,
As the God of our galaxy enters this place.
Once I created a waterfall of emotions
On the corner of my room,
Now it acts like the clear mind of crystal,
Captures pictures of lights
And frames them on my walls of possibilities.
The name of this poem is Morning
And it taught me,
We don't need to close eyes for dreaming,
Instead an open heart would be perfect
To dissolve the shadows of dark
Into the white rays of today's happy-beats.

Topic(s) of this poem: hope, inspirational, light, morning

Form: Free Verse


Comments about It's Not Fiction by Sanjukta Nag

  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/10/2016 7:16:00 AM)


    Light is peace and love. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Bharati Nayak (11/14/2015 11:50:00 PM)


    we don't need to close our eyes for dreaming.Instead an open heart would be perfect- - - Such beautiful thoughts enlighten us.Thanks for the wonderful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (11/13/2015 9:57:00 AM)


    We don't need to close eyes for dreaming,

    Quite true....... dreams we see with eyes open take us to great heights, but dreams with closed eyes evanesce with day light! Every morning is an avenue to new dreams and new visions! Great poem Sanjukta!
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  • Liza Sudina (11/12/2015 2:07:00 AM)


    To dissolve the shadows of dark
    Into the white rays of today's happy-beats.
    = you found the way out of your small spleen at last! good!
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  • Kelly Kurt (11/11/2015 1:07:00 PM)


    We don't need to close eyes for dreaming,
    Instead an open heart would be perfect
    Perfectly said. Thanks, Sanjukta
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/11/2015 12:41:00 PM)


    Yet another crafty poem with silken touch...Loved it SN....10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/11/2015 9:28:00 AM)


    very good poem, We don't need to close eyes for dreaming,
    Instead an open heart would be perfect
    To dissolve the shadows of dark
    Into the white rays of today's happy-beats- these lines give a clear message for the people in general, thanks for sharing.
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  • (11/11/2015 6:21:00 AM)


    what you wrote is very true
    for I don't wake up till lunch
    lovely poem thanks-10
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  • Vishal Sharma (11/11/2015 2:36:00 AM)


    you dissolve sweetness to your poetry in a right proportion.A great poetry to share with.10 (Report) Reply

  • Simone Inez Harriman (11/11/2015 2:29:00 AM)


    'We don't need to close eyes for dreaming,
    Instead an open heart would be perfect
    To dissolve the shadows of dark
    Into the white rays of today's happy-beats.'

    Beautiful words. I enjoyed your poem Sanjukta
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 11, 2015



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