It Was A Kiss Poem by Riza Braholli

It Was A Kiss

Rating: 5.0


It was a kiss, a kiss that sips
Sun stretched its roots to earth from air
The earth's veins boiled, from fire of lips
Like lightning flashes when away flips
Hummed form toes' nails to the hair.

I know not who the first kiss allowed
That we were fit was not a wonder
Tell me what happened within the cloud
When fire is kindled with lightening out loud
Towards the earth with rain and thunder.

A former kiss, wants other kisses
But oh that kiss was dearly precious
When longing hurts and winds the fires
I come to you thirsty with wishes
For I do fear there'll not be others.

It Was A Kiss
Sunday, June 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 14 February 2019

A wonderful romantic poem! The two lines which I like most are: " Tell me what happened within the cloud/When fire is kindled with lightening out loud" I vote this lovely poem with a 10

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Riza Braholli 03 August 2019

Thank you Dr. Dillip...

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Luz Hanaii 12 December 2018

So beautiful, each stanza stands by it self, loved it.

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Riza Braholli 03 August 2019

Luz thank you my good friend

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Aqua Flower 11 September 2018

A beautifully passionate write, Riza. Congratulations on this piece being selected.

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Riza Braholli 14 September 2018

Aqua thank you my friend... you have always read my poems

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Carl Roussell 11 September 2018

Lots of passion in this poem that rocks your world! . Congratulations on POD

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Riza Braholli 14 September 2018

Carl thank you my friend and respect for your poems

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M Asim Nehal 11 September 2018

Superb Poem, Congrats for the POTD honours, Nice picture as well.... I quote: Like lightning flashes when away flips Hummed form toes' nails to the hair.

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Riza Braholli 14 September 2018

Mohammed thank you and respect for your coment

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