It was a kiss, a kiss that sips
Sun stretched its roots to earth from air
The earth's veins boiled, from fire of lips
Like lightning flashes when away flips
Hummed form toes' nails to the hair.
I know not who the first kiss allowed
That we were fit was not a wonder
Tell me what happened within the cloud
When fire is kindled with lightening out loud
Towards the earth with rain and thunder.
A former kiss, wants other kisses
But oh that kiss was dearly precious
When longing hurts and winds the fires
I come to you thirsty with wishes
For I do fear there'll not be others.
A beautifully passionate write, Riza. Congratulations on this piece being selected.
Lots of passion in this poem that rocks your world! . Congratulations on POD
Superb Poem, Congrats for the POTD honours, Nice picture as well.... I quote: Like lightning flashes when away flips Hummed form toes' nails to the hair.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A wonderful romantic poem! The two lines which I like most are: " Tell me what happened within the cloud/When fire is kindled with lightening out loud" I vote this lovely poem with a 10
Thank you Dr. Dillip...