Joy Poem by Valerie Dohren

Joy

Rating: 5.0


To feel the sun upon my face
The dew beneath my feet
The soft and gentle summer breeze
Her perfume oh so sweet
And winter`s chill to complement
The scorching summer`s heat

With raindrops dancing on my hands
The trickling rambling stream
That glints below the shining sun
Like diamonds as they gleam
And then a spread of bluebells `neath
A brightly spanned sunbeam

So sing sweet bird upon the bough
And joyous be your song
To fill my heart with pure delight
Amidst the daily throng
Such joys as these can e`er be found
For all the day is long

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 04 May 2012

What language, what harmony and beauty of simplicity you remind one of. :)

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G.R. Gaus 04 May 2012

We should all take the time to appreciate the simple things of nature that surround our daily lives, you have a way to make things feel better in your poetry. Nice write as always Valerie.....

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Dave Walker 03 May 2012

With the sun on your face just relaxing out in the garden, makes you feel great been alive. A wonderful poem.

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Joseph Anderson 03 May 2012

A joy to read.Uplifting, inspiring and pure, with a gentle, flowing simplicity

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Michael Morgan 03 May 2012

effortlessly organized; much harder than it looks; sensual, optimistic and outwardly focused. MM

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Smoky Hoss 13 July 2012

True poetic words; so much depth and wisdom here. Wonderful.

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James Casey 02 July 2012

Nice flow Val, Majestic wording

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Walterrean Salley 29 May 2012

Expresses the simple joys of life, often over looked. Simple joys that brings great pleasure, and makes each day worth while. Beautifully written. 10

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Juan Olivarez 17 May 2012

So very soothing and comforting, great as always Val.

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Unwritten Soul 13 May 2012

The joy that waht really played when i reading this, my mood wanna have some dancing with every lines, so beautiful i like it....I agree with Diane and Charles as the others too, simply like it :) _Unwritten Soul

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